Monday, April 27, 2015

Revised Essay- Christen Roper

Writing my Argument Analysis Essay wasn't really fun which is why I decided to revise it. I just made some small grammar changes and changed some sentences here and there to make it sound better than it had been. Just changing and adding sentences seemed enough to make the essay sound and work better than it had. I am glad that it worked the way I wanted it to.






Christen Roper
English 102
Mrs. Thomas
February 20th 2015

Deadly Weapons of Choice
The Gun Control Ban That Has Affected Millions.
            April 16th, 2007, Seung-Hui Cho kills 32 people in the Virginia Teach massacre. December 14th, 2012, Adam Lanza opens fire in Sandy Hook Elementary in Newton, Connecticut, killing 20 kids and six adults. July 20th, 2012 James E. Holmes opens fire in a midnight screening of Batman: The Dark Knight Rises, killing twelve and wounding even more.  These few shootings pulled from the CNN article "25 Deadliest Mass Shootings in U.S. History," are just a few shootings that have rocked history. All of these massacres and many more were caused by people with emotional problems, allowing themselves to kill and wound so many, before taking their own lives, or were just inherently evil, thinking this was what they had to do. All of these violent acts against humanity were committed by using weapons like AR-15s and the Bushmaster XM15-E2S rifle, all known as automatic and semi-automatic guns. Since then, Congress has been arguing if they should ban guns all together, just ban certain guns that American citizens don’t need, give background checks,  or never let any criminal or mentally challenged person own a gun,. Laws against guns and gun control have been issued before, but with all of these new massacres popping up all over the world, they are putting the regulations back on the table and trying to see what would be more effective. All of these questions have been around the bend a few times and yet we have not come up with a plan. Most of the laws we try just don’t work anymore. So what should we do?

Tom Gresham’s own take on gun control states that it’s not really working in the way we think it would. In his article, “Gun control has a clear record of failure,” he explains that every ban that Congress has tried to propose to be made into a law just doesn’t work, and that something else should be done to help stop the countless crimes in the world. He explains that many of the bans that we have tried just don’t work anymore, and that we need to try something else or these laws are just going to keep failing.  However, Susan Milligan, says that we do need the ban on weapons. In her article, “We Need Gun Control to Stop More than Criminals” She states that whether it’s a ban on certain weapons, or a ban on all weapons, we need them to stop all of the deaths caused by gun violence. She also states that not all deaths with guns happen from criminals that managed to get his hand on a gun. It can happen from anyone, including accidents from an adolescent getting a hold of one, a toddler seeing one on a bed and thinking it’s a toy, and many others. Both articles are strong at certain points, trying to get their points across from different ways. Gresham states his point across clearly, while Milligan mulls around in her examples before starting in on her own point. However, Tom Gresham’s article is stronger because he states certain facts in the article. 

Gresham starts off his article explaining the tragedy of Sandy Hook, and what we are trying to do now after this tragedy rose up. He states, “In the wake of the horrific murders at the Sandy Hook school in Connecticut, America has been deluged with calls for ever-more-restrictive gun-control laws, and that's understandable. It's natural to think that's the solution if you don't know these measures have been tried and have always failed.” He explains that this does happen, when it may not really happen in fact. If you don’t know what to do or how to do it, then you may just think the solution is easy or even that there is a solution. But if you know it doesn’t work, then we don’t have a solution. 

 Milligan uses examples as well to pull her reader in. She uses accidental shootings like a kid bringing a shotgun in a musical instrument case to school or the man in Florida that shot a man in a theater for texting. Using these examples is enough to pull the readers in and start to explain their take on the issues, telling us her own proposal of the solution that she is offering. Her examples are well thought out since they are very recent, however, she doesn’t prove her point until the very end, therefore just giving us a thought without giving us her notion. Gresham goes in for the kill with one example, hooking us at the very beginning, while Milligan puts hers in the middle to get more of an appeal with the readers. Each of the authors have a strong appeal by beginning with these examples, but Gresham makes more sense because he already jumps to his point instead of milling around in the article like Milligan does. 

The two authors also use a variety of different fallacies in their articles to try and pull the readers in. Gresham starts off with the popular ad baculum fallacy when he starts to explain the rule of banning semi-automatic weapons. “Semiautomatics have been around for more than 100 years. President Teddy Roosevelt hunted with a semiautomatic rifle, as do millions of hunters today.” He tells us that Teddy Roosevelt hunted with a semiautomatic rifle, and since Teddy Roosevelt was indeed a president, semiautomatic weapons should be okay to use, which is an illogical point. Just because he used them doesn’t mean that they are okay to use in any way. 

In Gresham’s article, he states that we want to do something, but we just don’t know how. He tells the readers, “We all want to do something, but it is foolish and wasteful to return to a policy with a clear record of failure.” All of these bans and rules we have for guns just aren’t working and there’s no way that they will. His article has a very strong point of view, and with his examples and his tone, he strengthens his own opinion by pointing out what he believes. With his tone, you believe that he knows what he is talking about and that we should listen to him. He has clear examples and a clear choice of words, making his argument stronger.  However, Gresham uses his own fallacy no true Scotsman because he believes that what he is saying is the truth. He states, “Semiautomatics have been around for more than 100 years. President Teddy Roosevelt hunted with a semiautomatic rifle, as do millions of hunters today.” So does this mean that semi-automatics are okay? Does it mean that we should have them around? He doesn’t explain his reason for this very well. His main point in his article is not to ban semi-automatics or just ban guns all together, but better educate people about gun safety and gun control. In the article, “Assaulting Gun Owners And Freedoms,” written by William P. Hoar, he states that no one really understands what assault weapons really are.  “The would-be banners of weapons can’t even properly define the firearms they want to outlaw, often falling back on terms such as “assault weapons,” which evoke(misleadingly and purposefully) images of military machine-guns capable of full automatic fire,” (Hoar). Semi-automatic guns are military based guns without the ability of rapid fire. In example, with a twelve gauge shotgun you can shoot, but you have to chamber a shell, which takes a good five seconds, therefore it cannot count as an assault weapon. Assault weapons have the ability to just pull the trigger and the gun will shoot out as many bullets as it can in one magazine. You don’t have to keep reloading it and cocking it. We hear the word semi-automatic and immediately think it’s an assault weapon when it isn’t. We shouldn’t take them out of our hands for good, but we should teach others what to do and what not to do to keep the violence and death toll from guns down. 

Milligan’s main point into her article is, “Ban guns and only criminals will have guns, we are told. Put restrictions on gun ownership, or require people to undergo background checks first, and we will only make it harder for law-abiding citizens to get guns for protection, gun rights advocates say. They are right on both counts. But it would still prevent a great many murders.” This is true, but will it prevent a great many murders? She uses the fallacy begging the question stating that all of this will prevent a great many murders. But will it? Rhonda McMillan wrote about how banning certain guns would be able to help control the problems that we have today. In her article “Banning Assault Weapons”, she states, “regulation of military type assault weapons is clearly constitutionally permissive,” while also stating that it “does not raise any serious constitutional questions than legislation by state and federal government to regulate sawed-off shotguns, ‘Saturday night specials,’ machine guns and as enacted in the 100th Congress, undetectable plastic firearms.”  This helps Milligan’s article by stating the certain types of weapons that need to be banned. While her article is strong by using examples and by stating her thesis, she still has some trouble. Her tone sounds like it should be strong, but at the same time it’s not and we don’t really know what she is talking about at the moment. If she had a bit more information and her tone evoking the confidence she has, then maybe the article would be strong enough that more people will read and understand what she is stating. 

Both Gresham and Milligan use examples in their articles to help out their appeal. Unfortunately, while they both have examples, Milligan has almost too many that don’t really help her claim, and Gresham only has one, but it helps him state it very clearly. Gresham immediately starts off with Sandy Hook as his example. Sandy Hook is still very popular today because of the tragedy of losing twenty kids and six adults that didn’t deserve a thing but to have fun and teach. We still talk about it today and it’s still in our hearts. Gresham takes this one example to start and pull us in to his claim, wanting us to think that he has a good point when he’s talking about this. Milligan uses the same concept with her examples, and she uses many more, but her examples are vaguer. We don’t know when they happened or what actually happened and any of the other details that we need. Granted, she explains her examples and what they would think of it, but she still doesn’t give us enough to look into the article, and see her point. She doesn’t even explain her claim until the very end of the article, which doesn’t help her. 

With everything going on, now including the USC: Columbia murder-suicide that locked the campus down, gun control is now pressing into our main arguments. We don’t know whether to ban guns completely or not, ban certain weapons or not, and many other questions. Gresham and Milligan both reason with the thought of gun control, one being for and the other against. Each author has viable examples and points to their articles, bringing the audience in and trying to get us to side with them. Gun control is very serious, and I think that certain guns should be banned, but we shouldn’t take the right to bear arms away from us. I come from a gun bearing family, I know how to shoot a gun and my family, and soon I, own concealed weapons permits. We only have these to protect ourselves from people out there, so our rights shouldn’t be taken away. Gresham’s article is strong and pulls you in immediately, while Milligan’s mills around but has a strong point. I agree with both of them but I am more toward Gresham’s because what he states is true. Gun control has been an on and off topic for a while and it still seems to fail. Gun control will be one of those serious topics for a while, but what we do with it may or may not work. We just have to try and see where it all goes.




Works Cited
Gresham, Tom. "Gun Control Has a Clear Record of Failure." The Columbus Dispatch. N.p., 6 Jan. 2013. Web. 16 Feb. 2015

Hoar, William P. "Assaulting Gun Owners And Freedoms." New American (08856540) 29.7 (2013): 41-43. Academic Search Complete. Web. 16 Feb. 2015.

McMillion, Rhonda. "Banning Assault Weapons." ABA Journal 76.8 (1990): 110. Academic Search Complete. Web. 16 Feb. 2015.

Milligan, Susan. "We Need Gun Control to Stop More Than Criminals." US News. U.S.News & World Report, 16 Jan. 2014. Web. 11 Feb. 2015.

Opfer, Chris. "What's the Difference between a Semi-automatic Weapon and a Machine Gun?" HowStuffWorks. HowStuffWorks.com, n.d. Web. 19 Feb. 2015.

"25 Deadliest Mass Shootings in U.S. History." CNN. Cable News Network, 2 Sept. 2014. Web. 12 Feb. 2015.

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